How's My Driving?

If you have any questions or concerns about how I play Jay, please let me know here! I appreciate any and all constructive criticism. Here are some points I'd appreciate input on:

• How strong is his voice? Can you get a clear idea of what kind of character he is, or is it muddled?
• How is my tsun to dere ratio? Jay has a naturally difficult personality--am I writing it in a way that's fun to play against?
• Does he know too much? Too little? Although Jay's specialty is information, I don't want him to infomod other characters. Let me know if I'm out of line.
• How is the general prose of my tags? Since Jay is closemouthed about himself, I'll be relying a lot on action tags for introspection. Am I giving you enough to work with?

Anon is enabled and comments are screened. You can also reach me by PMing this account. Thank you for your time and input!