tag:dreamwidth.org,2013-09-18:2082174 "I can't stand it when there's something I don't know. You know?" Jay the Unseen 2023-09-21T22:33:29Z tag:dreamwidth.org,2013-09-18:2082174:1747 2014-05-14T16:52:44Z 2023-09-21T22:33:29Z public 0 <b>How's My Driving?</b><br /><br />If you have any questions or concerns about how I play Jay, please let me know here! I appreciate any and all constructive criticism. Here are some points I'd appreciate input on:<br /><br />• How strong is his voice? Can you get a clear idea of what kind of character he is, or is it muddled?<br />• How is my tsun to dere ratio? Jay has a naturally difficult personality--am I writing it in a way that's fun to play against?<br />• Does he know too much? Too little? Although Jay's specialty is information, I don't want him to infomod other characters. Let me know if I'm out of line.<br />• How is the general prose of my tags? Since Jay is closemouthed about himself, I'll be relying a lot on action tags for introspection. Am I giving you enough to work with?<br /><br />Anon is <b>enabled</b> and comments are <b>screened</b>. You can also reach me by PMing this account. Thank you for your time and input!<br /><br /><img src="https://www.dreamwidth.org/tools/commentcount?user=scallopstrategist&ditemid=1747" width="30" height="12" alt="comment count unavailable" style="vertical-align: middle;"/> comments tag:dreamwidth.org,2013-09-18:2082174:676 2014-01-27T06:14:58Z 2014-06-22T02:55:52Z public 50 how many times can jay be an asshole to his friends?<br />LET'S FIND OUT<br /><br />Currently updated through the Character Quest Introductions.<br /><br /><img src="https://www.dreamwidth.org/tools/commentcount?user=scallopstrategist&ditemid=676" width="30" height="12" alt="comment count unavailable" style="vertical-align: middle;"/> comments