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How's My Driving?
If you have any questions or concerns about how I play Jay, please let me know here! I appreciate any and all constructive criticism. Here are some points I'd appreciate input on:
• How strong is his voice? Can you get a clear idea of what kind of character he is, or is it muddled?
• How is my tsun to dere ratio? Jay has a naturally difficult personality--am I writing it in a way that's fun to play against?
• Does he know too much? Too little? Although Jay's specialty is information, I don't want him to infomod other characters. Let me know if I'm out of line.
• How is the general prose of my tags? Since Jay is closemouthed about himself, I'll be relying a lot on action tags for introspection. Am I giving you enough to work with?
Anon is enabled and comments are screened. You can also reach me by PMing this account. Thank you for your time and input!
If you have any questions or concerns about how I play Jay, please let me know here! I appreciate any and all constructive criticism. Here are some points I'd appreciate input on:
• How strong is his voice? Can you get a clear idea of what kind of character he is, or is it muddled?
• How is my tsun to dere ratio? Jay has a naturally difficult personality--am I writing it in a way that's fun to play against?
• Does he know too much? Too little? Although Jay's specialty is information, I don't want him to infomod other characters. Let me know if I'm out of line.
• How is the general prose of my tags? Since Jay is closemouthed about himself, I'll be relying a lot on action tags for introspection. Am I giving you enough to work with?
Anon is enabled and comments are screened. You can also reach me by PMing this account. Thank you for your time and input!
